This was the english paper that i wrote were I had to take the nursery ryme of Jack and Jill and add more detail. I described Jack as Jonny and Jill like Jesse. It was requested so here it is. Date sometime in Febuary Disclaimer: I don't own 'em. I just used the descriptions. Please don't sue me Category: Comedy/ Parody Rating: PG-13 Archivers: why not. Go ahead I don't mind Jack and Jill Jack, a teenage boy with blond hair and blue eyes who is always in trouble, and his companion Jill, a beautiful young teenager with striking red hair and deep green eyes, walk slowly and laboriously up the green, rolling hill to fetch a pailful of water for their weary old father. Their old father rocks back and forth in his old rocking chair on the porch of their run down cabin. He can walk only with lots of help and can’t do much of anything anymore. So Jack and Jill had to get the pail of water for him, for he cried out that he was dreadfully thirsty and they should get the water for him now. So now finally Jack and Jill reach the top of the hill hoping that they could rest before going home. But it is not to be. Their old father screams at them in his old scratchy voice to bring the water to him now. So Jack fills the pail and turns for the journey home. But Jack the clumsy and lazy boy he is left his shoelace untied and so as he turns to go down the hill he steps on his shoelace and loses his balance and rolls down the hill bumping and groaning the whole way. His groaning stops when Jack hits his head hard against the large, gray boulder at the very bottom of the hill. Deep red blood flows away from the boulder and his head and stains the green grass red. Jill cries out in horror and tries to run after him but she slips on the grass and slides and rolls down the hill after him. Hoped you enjoyed it! Stacy Windsong Khirsana the White Shadowhunter Lothario ------------------------------------------------------------------------ To unsubscribe from this mailing list, or to change your subscription to digest, go to the ONElist web site, at http://www.onelist.com and select the User Center link from the menu bar on the left.